[HQ Ignorance] Homeland: Uncolings
Sam Elliot
sam.elliot1 at btinternet.com
Thu Jan 25 19:02:28 UTC 2007
I like the Potty Noble most of all :)
Here are some comments, based on no particular knowledge of Uncolings...hope some are useful...
- Presumably in the not-spring they are in small family groups?
- I don´t think the Petty Noble makes sense, actually.
- "Tundra Survival" rather than "Live in Tundra"?
- Resist Cold?
- These are returning boomerangs are they? Not the original non-returning ones (according to my understanding - any Ossies in the house?)
- relationship to shaman rather than temple?
- Common magic - Kill wolf seems a bit extreme for CM - Drive Wolf Off? Prepare Mushroom is simpler. Hide in Snow? Blubber? Snowcoat? Rudolfsnose? Deliver Present?
- In the real world, reindeer eat moss (maybe lichen, can´t remember), not mushrooms - not sure if your forage mushrooms had a different meaning or if you intended that or if I´m totally misguided?
- Core Practice - Understand reindeer? (the abilities you have seem more fundamental to the culture than to a religious thing). Maybe Trace lineage?
- Endure Isolation rather than loneliness?
- For the ancestral spirits, you could include something more aggressive, some buck deer type thing. Also more hunty things (it´s mostly survival at the momemnt - fair enough I guess)
Got bored of the weapon discussion too...zzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....
Hope some of that helps...
Sam.
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